Draw this again

okay so I did this once before on the same piece but I was really proud of it so here it is again!!! the files are squished in the template so here is the link to the after product [link]
and the older product also shown here in my original compare [link]

So here they are hope its good I hope I get some kid of recognition for this because I am in the dumps and this would totally perk me up but there are so many good artists I dont think I have a chance oh well heres for trying!!!!!